Re: [Trad April] Re: Formats ouverts

[Jeanne Rasata <rasataj AT gmail.com>]

Salut, Fred et Antoine,

2013/4/8 Frederic Couchet <fcouchet AT april.org>
> les traductions sont en ligne :
>
> - http://www.april.org/en/open-formats
>
> - le poster
>   http://media.april.org/docs/formats_ouverts/open_formats_poster_A3_EN.pdf
>
> - le flyer :
>
>   recto
>   
> http://media.april.org/docs/formats_ouverts/open_formats_3fold_recto_EN.pdf
>
>   verso :
>   
> http://media.april.org/docs/formats_ouverts/open_formats_3fold_verso_EN.pdf
>
> Si tu notes des erreurs ou des corrections à faire je pense qu'Antoine
> peut les intégrer.
>
> Si tu veux je peux te fournir les textes au format brut.

Fautes de grammaire:

- with the hope that it is compatible with its computer.
+ with the hope that it is compatible with his computer.

- Carole download
+ Carole downloads

- Documented created by April
+ Document created by April

- Carole, another user, choses
+ Carole, another user, chooses

- or by using using another interoperable software.
+ or by using using another interoperable software program.

Phrase qui dit le contraire de ce qu'on veut dire:

- He doesn't have the same software program, which refuses to open the 
document.
+ He has a different software program, which refuses to open the document.

Changements de ponctuation conseillés pour faciliter la lecture:

- So that your documents might be read more easily by other people,
- without you having to worry about which software they use, choose
- open formats.
+ So that your documents might be read more easily by other
+ people---without you having to worry about which software they
+ use---choose open formats.

- text editing program
+ text-editing program
(À plusieurs reprises.)

cuz it just sounds better:

- for illustration purposes
+ for the purposes of illustration