Re: [Trad April] Re: Formats ouverts

[Jeanne Rasata <rasataj AT gmail.com>]

Salut, Fred,

On Thu, Apr 11, 2013 at 2:54 AM, Frederic Couchet <fcouchet AT april.org> wrote:
>>>>>> "Jeanne" == Jeanne Rasata <rasataj AT gmail.com> writes:
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>     Jeanne> Fautes de grammaire:
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> Merci, je transmets le tout à Antoine.
>
> Pas de corrections à faire sur le texte de la page
> http://www.april.org/en/open-formats ?

- To celebrate the Document Freedom Day April has published a poster
+ To celebrate Document Freedom Day, April has published a poster

- to explain to software users, the interest of opting for "open
+ to explain to software users how opting for "open

- formats" to exchange and store their files.
+ formats" to exchange and store their files is in their interest.

- without restriction nor compensation,
+ without restriction or compensation,


- file. Whether it is a text file, a picture, a video or any other
+ file. Whether it is a text file, a picture, a video, or any other

- "interoperable".
+ "interoperable."


- "open formats".
+ "open formats."

- interoperability or if the file design recipe is kept undisclosed,
+ interoperability, or if the file design recipe is kept undisclosed,

- 'closed' and do not allow interoperability.
+ "closed," and do not allow interoperability.

- choosing between an open file format or a closed one
+ choosing between an open file format and a closed one

- Open formats have the advantage to be freely usable
+ Open formats have the advantage of being freely usable

- software editors who aim at locking users in the use
+ software editors who aim at locking users into the use

- They may turn your documents unreadable after some years.
+ They may make your documents unreadable after some years.

- They prevent users to opt for the software of their choice,
+ They prevent users from opting for the software of their choice,

- Free Software are programs
- Free Software programs are programs

- of use, the right to study it in order to know its functioning, the
- right to modify in order to improve it.
+ of use, the right to study it in order to know it works, the
+ right to modify it in order to improve it.

- developpers
+ developers

- recording methods and format descriptions used are de facto
+ the recording methods and format descriptions used are de facto

- eveyone
+ everyone

- pereniality (n'est pas anglais)
+ durability/permanence

- for the type of documents you would like to exchange or store at:
+ for the type of documents you would like to exchange or store, at
www.april.org/formats-ouverts or at wiki.april.org/w/FormatsOuverts.


Merci,
j.