Re: [Trad April] Re: [Trad April] soumission à rele cture de la traduction de http://www.april.org/fr/rms-acteur -fondamental

[Guillaume Teissier <gteissier AT april.org>]

bonjour

je propose l'omission de "au sens étymologique", je pense que la sens
de la phrase n'est pas modifié en l'absence de ce terme.

la version finale que je propose est la suivante:

Testimony during the 10 years of April in 2006.

April is the French key player in launching and promoting Free
Software. By highlighting the ethical and political aspects related to
Free Software April is destined for awakening consumers that computer
freedom is a major value at stake. The association also plays an
important role as a sentinel to insure computer users fundamental
rights.

- Richard Stallman, president of the Free Software Foundation (September 
2006).

merci à Philippe, Benoit et Kat pour leur relecture.

guillaume

2009/10/10, Marc Chauvet <mchauvet AT april.org>:
> Bonjour Guillaume,
>
> Merci pour cette traduction.
>
> J'ignore si le point du "sens étymologique" a été réglé, mais si c'est le
> cas, n'hésite pas à renvoyer une version intégrant les différentes
> suggestions que tu auras retenues et ce sera parti pour la publication.
>
> Cordialement
> Marc
>
>
> 2009/10/7 Guillaume Teissier <gteissier AT april.org>
>
>> bonjour,
>>
>> je vous soumets pour avis et relecture la traduction de la citation de
>> RMS, en pièce jointe et dans le corps du message.
>>
>> --8--
>> Testimony during the 10 years of April in 2006.
>>
>> April is the French key player in launching and promoting free
>> software. By highlighting the ethical and political (in the
>> etymological meaning of the term) questions related to Open Source
>> Software April participates in awaking consumers that computer freedom
>> is a major stake. The association also plays an important role as
>> sentinel to defend the fundamental rights of computer users.
>>
>> - Richard Stallman, president of the Free Software Foundation (September
>> 2006).
>> --8--
>>
>> comments and suggestions are welcome ;p
>> guillaume
>>
>>
>> --
>> http://www.april.org/wws/info/traductions
>>
>>
>
Testimony during the 10 years of April in 2006.

April is the French key player in launching and promoting Free Software. By 
highlighting the ethical and political aspects related to Free Software April 
is destined for awakening consumers that computer freedom is a major value at 
stake. The association also plays an important role as a sentinel to insure 
computer users fundamental rights.

- Richard Stallman, president of the Free Software Foundation (September 
2006).