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Re: [Trad April] FR->EN Press Release on Parliament adopting the priority to free software in the law


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  • From: Thibaut BOYER <thibaut.boyer AT gmail.com>
  • To: traductions AT april.org
  • Subject: Re: [Trad April] FR->EN Press Release on Parliament adopting the priority to free software in the law
  • Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:40:13 +0200

Hi,

The translation is done and awaits proof reading.

Done.

I agree with "enactment" (line 108).
It remains some choices to make at :
  • line 81
  • " une première étape quiespérons-le, sera suivie par la mise en place d'une vraie politique publique" --> Free Software priority in the Public Service for Higher Education is a first step and, hopefully, will be followed by **setting forth | the implementation of** a real public policy
  • what about "will be followed by the establishement of a real public policy"?
line 95
  • "Saluons l'évolution positive du gouvernement et des parlementaires" --> We *appreciate | welcome* the positive *change | move* of the Government and MPs
  • I'm in favor of "We welcome the positive move of the Government and MPs", and you?
Thibaut



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