Re: [Trad April] FR->EN Press Release on Parliament adopting the priority to free software in the law

[von.mokor AT yahoo.com]

I agree with the suggestion by Thibaut. There is a kind of punch in the 
statement.

>>>    * line 81
>>>              Free Software priority in the Public Service for
>>>                Higher Education is a first step and, hopefully,
>>>                will be followed by the establishement
>>>                of a real public policy"?

>> 



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On 09.07.2013, at 13:04, Therese Godefroy <godef.th AT free.fr> wrote:

> Le mardi 09 juillet 2013 à 07:48 +0200, von.mokor AT yahoo.com a écrit :
> 
> 
>> I agree with the suggestions below by Thibaut.
> 
>>>      * line 81
>>>              * " une première étape qui, espérons-le, sera suivie
>>>                par la mise en place d'une vraie politique publique"
>>>                --> Free Software priority in the Public Service for
>>>                Higher Education is a first step and, hopefully,
>>>                will be followed by **setting forth | the
>>>                implementation of** a real public policy
>>>              * what about "will be followed by the establishement
>>>                of a real public policy"?
> 
> 
> Hello Mokor and Thibaut,
> 
> Thanks a lot for your proofreading.
> 
> I ended up turning the sentence around to make it more palatable -- to
> me, of course:   ;)
> 
>        "Free Software priority in the Public Service for Higher
>        Education is a first step and, hopefully, a real public policy
>        in favour of Free Software will be set up next."
> 
> What do you think?
> 
> Thérèse
> 
> 
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