Re: [Trad April] Re: Request for proofreading of a very short note about the Software Freedom Day

[von.mokor AT yahoo.com]

Hello,

I wish to suggest:

....April's P... A..... O... will be there to talk about

OR

...will be there, and will be talking about......

Or

..in attendance, and will be talking about....



Mokor


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On 04.09.2013, at 13:47, Thérèse Godefroy <godef.th AT free.fr> wrote:

> Le mercredi 04 septembre 2013 à 13:37 +0200, Thérèse Godefroy a écrit :
>> Le mercredi 04 septembre 2013 à 12:57 +0200, Grateful Frog a écrit :
>>> It's good to go!
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Ciao,
>>> Bob
>> 
>> Thanks!
>> Thérèse
>> 
>> It may be better to quote "Software Freedom Day" rather than italicize
>> it, since it is in English. 
>> Also, I had forgotten the title. To avoid repeating "lecture" too many
>> times, Jeanne will be talking instead of giving a lecture :).
>> 
>> 
>> Here is the result, for cut and paste:
>> 
>> A lecture on the recent political developments affecting Free Software
>> in France will be given on 18 September 2013, in Amsterdam
>> 
>> <p>On 18 September 2013, a series of lectures will be given in
>> Amsterdam, in connection with the “Software Freedom Day”. Jeanne
>> Tadeusz, April's Public Affairs Officer, will be there and talk about
>> the recent political developments affecting Free Software in
>> France.</p>
>> 
>> <p>The event will take place at the <em>Centrum Wiskunde & Informatica
>> (CWI)</em>, the National Institute for Research in Mathematics and
>> Computer Sciences. Complete information about this series of lectures is
>> available on <a
>> href="http://www.softwarefreedomday.eu/";>http://www.softwarefreedomday.eu/</a>.
>>  Attendance is free of charge and open to everyone upon registration.</p>
> 
> Ooops again, missed a word in the title:
> 
> A lecture on the recent political and legislative developments affecting
> Free Software in France will be given on 18 September 2013, in Amsterdam
> 
> Exactly 140 characters. Barely makes it to Twitter.
> 
> 
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