Re: [Trad April] Re: Request for proofreading of a very short note about the Software Freedom Day

[Thérèse Godefroy <godef.th AT free.fr>]

Le mercredi 04 septembre 2013 à 14:08 +0200, von.mokor AT yahoo.com a
écrit :
> Hello,
> 
> I wish to suggest:
> 
> ....April's P... A..... O... will be there to talk about

I prefer this one because it is shorter. 

Thank you Mokor!

[...]
 

We end up with: 

A lecture on the recent political and legislative developments affecting
Free Software in France will be given on 18 September 2013, in Amsterdam
> > 
> > Exactly 140 characters. Barely makes it to Twitter.

[144 characters, not 140. Doesn't make it.]

Shorter versions of the title:

- A lecture on the recent political and legislative developments
affecting Free Software in France will be given on 18 September, in
Amsterdam

- Lecture on the recent political and legislative developments affecting
Free Software in France, 18 September 2013, Amsterdam

<p>On 18 September 2013, a series of lectures will be given in
Amsterdam, in connection with the “Software Freedom Day”. Jeanne
Tadeusz, April's Public Affairs Officer, will be there to talk about
the recent political developments affecting Free Software in
France.</p>
 
<p>The event will take place at the <em>Centrum Wiskunde & Informatica
(CWI)</em>, the National Institute for Research in Mathematics and
Computer Sciences. Complete information about this series of lectures is
available on <a
href="http://www.softwarefreedomday.eu/";>http://www.softwarefreedomday.eu/</a>.
Attendance is free of charge and open to everyone upon registration.</p>

Thérèse