Re: [Trad April] [FR->EN] Translation request : http://pad.april.org/p/FrEn-tva-livres

[Jeanne Tadeusz <jtadeusz AT april.org>]

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Jeanne Tadeusz
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Le jeudi 7 novembre 2013 14:55:43, Thérèse Godefroy a écrit :
> Le jeudi 07 novembre 2013 à 00:05 +0100, Jason Goeppinger a écrit :
> > Hi all,
> > 
> > I've re-read the latest translation but was bothered by one run-on,
> > fairly unwieldy sentence.  I offer an alternative which I think reads
> > a little better.
> > 
> > I hope it's helpful.
> > 
> > --J
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I like your version _much_ better.  :)
> 
> Thérèse
I've proofread it, and with the second version it's fine by me. 

Best,

Jeanne